Saturday, March 5, 2011

Change

This post has been published by me as a part of the Blog-a-Ton Season 2 edition 18; the eighteenth edition of the online marathon of Bloggers; where we decide and we write. To be part of the next edition, visit and start following Blog-a-Ton.
Just tried a little combination of 55 fiction genre and my 'His & Hers' series...


His

After  his routine drunken night he woke up with a fuzzy head. Slowly, last night flashed before his eyes... the screaming, the beating and her little girl huddled in a corner, shivering with fear... he sighed and resolved to change... for his wife & daughter. He staggered out but saw no one except a note.

Hers

As she sat in front of the mirror looking at her bruised body, she heard her daughter, “will baba hit me too if i disobey?” and she suddenly realised it’s time... for a change. She picked up her girl and left, leaving behind a note, ‘My daughter will not have the same fate as mine.’



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20 comments:

  1. T F CarthickMarch 5, 2011 at 5:08 PM

    Crisp and yet gets the point across.Nice one.

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  2. mayurMarch 5, 2011 at 6:46 PM

    Wow!.....gets across the point in such few words...thats brevity at its best!

    This also highlights one more point, changing isn't enough.....one should change before its too late!

    All the best for BAT!

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  3. MuddassirShahMarch 5, 2011 at 7:29 PM

    Kudos!!

    Standing ovation. BRief, limited words but unlimited effect on the heart, soul and mind. very well written megha.
    I hope you will be one of the winners

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  4. Saket DabiMarch 6, 2011 at 2:36 AM

    110 words said it all :)

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  5. MAVERICKMarch 6, 2011 at 10:48 AM

    Simple, crisp, unique yet touching. Good job done I must say.All the best

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  6. Someone is SpecialMarch 6, 2011 at 5:23 PM

    loved this take, two 55's and you said it all.. Smiles, mine is what most people feel in their heart but no one acts to achieve it, Change

    Someone is Special

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  7. the criticsMarch 7, 2011 at 1:00 AM

    short and sweet

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  8. Aashish SoodMarch 7, 2011 at 12:17 PM

    short and sweet and very very well done... by and far the best that I have read (I hope except mine :P)

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  9. Dr. Pratibha SinghMarch 7, 2011 at 3:46 PM

    heartfelt! and loved this change because this change is good for them.

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  10. MeghaMarch 7, 2011 at 10:43 PM

    short but hitting right dere!!

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  11. AmityMarch 9, 2011 at 7:00 AM

    Short but the message is well sent across!!!

    Congrats Megha!

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  12. SwetaMarch 9, 2011 at 3:04 PM

    Two change but not helpful for each other...
    nice and to the point...
    best of luk for BAT!

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  13. AnuradhaMarch 10, 2011 at 10:49 PM

    Loved it :)

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  14. aativasMarch 11, 2011 at 3:33 PM

    Sad but True story of life around!

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  15. The twenties girlMarch 16, 2011 at 7:16 AM

    lots was conveyed in such little words... Somehow, I understand the pain.. & how its time to change! Congrats! Well deserved...

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  16. SlothMarch 16, 2011 at 10:49 AM

    quite intriguing!

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  17. Pranav GuptaMarch 16, 2011 at 11:01 AM

    Small, Crisp and Clear!!!

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  18. UnknownMarch 16, 2011 at 11:17 PM

    LOVED it!..

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  19. AnonymousMarch 21, 2011 at 8:12 PM

    good one there!!!

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  20. PritzJuly 5, 2011 at 1:13 PM

    Beautiful! loved it!

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