Saturday, March 5, 2011

Change

This post has been published by me as a part of the Blog-a-Ton Season 2 edition 18; the eighteenth edition of the online marathon of Bloggers; where we decide and we write. To be part of the next edition, visit and start following Blog-a-Ton.
Just tried a little combination of 55 fiction genre and my 'His & Hers' series...


His

After  his routine drunken night he woke up with a fuzzy head. Slowly, last night flashed before his eyes... the screaming, the beating and her little girl huddled in a corner, shivering with fear... he sighed and resolved to change... for his wife & daughter. He staggered out but saw no one except a note.

Hers

As she sat in front of the mirror looking at her bruised body, she heard her daughter, “will baba hit me too if i disobey?” and she suddenly realised it’s time... for a change. She picked up her girl and left, leaving behind a note, ‘My daughter will not have the same fate as mine.’



The fellow Blog-a-Tonics who took part in this Blog-a-Ton and links to their respective posts can be checked here. To be part of the next edition, visit and start following Blog-a-Ton.

21 comments:

  1. Crisp and yet gets the point across.Nice one.

    ReplyDelete
  2. Wow!.....gets across the point in such few words...thats brevity at its best!

    This also highlights one more point, changing isn't enough.....one should change before its too late!

    All the best for BAT!

    ReplyDelete
  3. Kudos!!

    Standing ovation. BRief, limited words but unlimited effect on the heart, soul and mind. very well written megha.
    I hope you will be one of the winners

    ReplyDelete
  4. Simple, crisp, unique yet touching. Good job done I must say.All the best

    ReplyDelete
  5. loved this take, two 55's and you said it all.. Smiles, mine is what most people feel in their heart but no one acts to achieve it, Change

    Someone is Special

    ReplyDelete
  6. short and sweet and very very well done... by and far the best that I have read (I hope except mine :P)

    ReplyDelete
  7. heartfelt! and loved this change because this change is good for them.

    ReplyDelete
  8. short but hitting right dere!!

    ReplyDelete
  9. Short but the message is well sent across!!!

    Congrats Megha!

    ReplyDelete
  10. Two change but not helpful for each other...
    nice and to the point...
    best of luk for BAT!

    ReplyDelete
  11. Sad but True story of life around!

    ReplyDelete
  12. lots was conveyed in such little words... Somehow, I understand the pain.. & how its time to change! Congrats! Well deserved...

    ReplyDelete
  13. good one there!!!

    ReplyDelete

Like it... Share it!

Related Posts Plugin for WordPress, Blogger...

Spread The Word... Do Ask Me First!